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2002-10-07 - angelaeryn
Content: 33/40 The thing I admire the most about this diary is its evolution from its beginning to its current starting point. Naturally any diary is different than it starts out to be; but the thing that makes this diary shine is the evolution of the your self-esteem as you go along. It begins with a girl who is shy and obsesses over her crush, Blue, and is crushed when she finds out he knows . It then progresses on to a lovely, thriving LOTR obsession in which her personality and confidence flower as she begins to make other friends through it. I like this diary. Very honest. The only thing I don’t like about it is that a lot of entries don’t have much cohesion; they’re just random amusing anecdotes. But all in all, great job! Literary style/grammar 10/10 Perfect, as far as I can see. Grammar usually fantastic, an amusing, flowy writing style, and all caps and periods. There are a few sentence fragments but as a purveyor of those in my own diary it would be awfully hypocritical to take off for that. Layout: 5/15 Ugh, this is definitely a downer in an otherwise fantastic diary. It’s just a plain black background with purple font and a banner proclaiming your name. There are many many many many designers available, including our own Sally and Milky to choose a design from. But it’s very, very boring now. Contact: 3/5 Guestbook, notes, e-mail. I know for a fact you have AIM and MSN messenger, cuz I chat with you, so if someone just loves your diary that way they can get in touch with you. Extras: 10/10 quizzes, cast, links, awards, notifylist, counter, fun rings…good job! Ethereality: 15/15 Definitely an ethereal diary. Your diary is very clear, honest, and totally you, and you have no problem stating how you feel. Plus you like LOTR, which is an automatic 5 points (hahaha). Will I return? 5/5 You know it! Total: 81/100 B- Additional Comments Get yourself a lovely new layout, and you’ll have an A+ diary! Reviewed by Samantha
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