2003-01-20 - bluemoonrise

bluemoonrise

Content: 30/40

Your life is interesting. Your style is zany and erratic and I like it, and your diary, very much, and God bless the cast page because I always got all these girls mixed up. Your entries about your relationships interested me extremely, and all your friends and girlfriends and friends/ex-girlfriends all flung together made for a very interesting read. I couldn’t identify with everything you wrote about—I’m not a lesbian, I’m not British, and I am but in high school—but I really enjoyed everything you wrote nonetheless.

Literary style/grammar: 6/10

Some of your entries are rather choppy and disjointed, but you have a neat style so extra points for that.

Layout: 8/15

Mmmmm…I don’t like it so much. I think all of the extra things on the side—birthday counter and tagboard and such—should go on another page. And your picture is very small, and there are images in a layout I think they should be the center of attention. And the quote on the bottom has links that don’t really lead to anything.

Contact: 2/5

Just a TagBoard, of which I’m not very fond. Guestbooks are better. And maybe at least a link to your notes?

Extras: 10/10

scrolly quotes, TagBoard, nice poem quote thingie on the end, birthday counter, diarist, top 100 diaries, ciao.com, cancer ribbons (a simple lovely idea!), links and diaries.

Ethereality: 15/15

You are very unique, and you write very nicely.

Will I return? 3/5

Maybe.

Total: 74/100 C

Additional comments

I enjoy your diary immensely, but your rather haphazard layout is distracting.

You get into so many confusing situations, relationship-wise—good luck!

Reviewed by Samantha

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