2005-01-04 - eowyn86
Alone...but not lonely
Content: 36/40
(I left this section for last, so I might reference sections below it, just so you know). As I said in the ethereality section, your entries focus on unique and thought-provoking topics, and I really enjoyed them. You spoke about all kinds of different issues, and gave lots of your personal opinions, which is what is most important to do when you're talking about something controversial. I do think though, that my enjoyment might have been a bit different if I didn't agree with you on just about everything you said, but I did, so it's okay.
The entries were well planned also, often following a very scholarly (yes, english major) pattern to reaching your own opinions and conclusions about whatever said topic was. These are very well written and interesting entries--nice job!
Literary style/Grammar: 10/10
English major indeed.
Layout: 14/15
Pretty, but definately different, like you said. The picture seems a little funky to me, but I think that's just because the subject was moving. Did you take that picture? Oh, yep, your copyright says you indeed did. Nice job, I really like it. The fact that you made it, and it's all your own stuff definately gets you points because it obviously matches your writing and style if you made it and like it enough to use it.
Contact: 4/5
Notes, Email, Guestbook.
Extras: 5/5
Imood, Myself, Links, Diaryrings, Reviews....
Ethereality: 12/15
Hm...originality...your entries are definately focused on unique topics! I especially liked "be intolerant" because it's true. Too much we worry about being intolerant rather than effective about anything. That or the entry about endangered animals. I agree with that too! Not saying humans are most important, but if we care for us better, we can care for the world better too.
Will I return? 3/5
Theoretically, I just might.
Total: 89/100 --- B+
Additional comments:
Music? Still Garden State soundtrack.
Reviewed by: Valerie!
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