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2003-04-09 - Falling0star
Content: 38/40 You have a gift in that you can make any person- friend or stranger- feel welcome at your diary due to your writing. The way in which you write is identifiable to most everyone who chooses to take a peak. You write so broadly and so generally that I rarely feel as though I do not know about the subject matter. I was quite amazed with your connection you made with the tricycle to life. You are also incredibly gifted at mixing in touches of humor and never going over board. The only thing that causes you to lose two points is occasionally we catch wind of poetry or songs- I dislike when poetry or songs make up an entry. I do not mind if they are included with a story or a rant... but never alone. Literary style/grammar: 10/10 You know, I don't really care about grammer. A few wrongly spelled words do not bother me, your sentences are coherent, if not amazing, and swear words only add to the content. :) Layout: 14/15 You make your own, and I always love seeing what your lovely brain has come up with. Your current layout is clean and precise. However, the images sometime don't work. Contact: 5/5 guestbook, notes, two e-mails, tag-board Extras: 11/10 You have your own little extras page! 100 facts (I loved that), Annest of Annes- I loved Anne of Green Gables when I was a little girl- other contact methods, counter, googlisms, link to me, my perfect man, wish list. On top of that you have rings, quizzes, a link to your writing, graphics... Wow! Ethereality: 15/15 I love you, Jol! You are an amazing writer. Will I return? 5/5 Of course. Total: 98/100 Additional comments Don’t be worried about Perth. You are an incredible person who will make many friends, and will make many people smile. Reviewed by Lexi
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