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2005-03-17 - kaybiff
I started here and ended here. I'm going to try something different. I'll make random comments on entries as I go, and tie up at the end. Here, you used the word 'elucidate' properly, and it made me think--excellent--I love a challenging read! Here, what exactly are the six degrees of Kevin Bacon? Here, tomfoolery is a most excellent word to use too, and I see now why you haven't updated as often! Finally, here, the second paragraph is nice and raw and emotional and...good! In conclusion, you have an excellent vocabulary and grip on the English language, making for a very enjoyable read. Your entries, while the content was not particularly striking or even entirely interesting to me personally, were well written and not unbearable for a lowly reviewer like myself (who doesn't know you anyway, and can't be expected to really have great interest in your life from a few entries). Your writing is good (duh), and I enjoyed the review of it. Nice job, and keep it up!
I already touched on this a little bit. Grammar, punctuation, spelling and vocabulary were all fine and well written. Literary style, I would say you have a very unique style and voice quality to your writing, which is an important characteristic for any writer.
I think this is sort of an ongoing design that you have, which you edit occasionally? I am the same way, and I really like your St. Patrick's day design. The whole theme goes very well, except I don't get what the title means. What does the title mean? Oh wait! I found the answer.
Notes, email, notifylist, AIM, guestbook. Five for five.
Oh god, here's just five to prove that you have more than enough: Cast, Rings, Favorites, 400, Quizzes...
Having an entire other site which you keep all of your extras on is brilliant and unique. Full marks for that, and it increases the organization so much. Excellent!
Theoretically, Prolly.
Favorite quote: "Pointing out the obvious, one fact at a time." from your bottom of the page. Also, Music of the Review: the best of Enya!
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