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2002-10-16 - peggysue162
Content: 38/40 At first glance I thought your writing would be dull and repetitive (heh, no offense) simply because most of the peeps who I've read and have written constantly about boys are dull and repetitive. Yet in between your confessions of love and your outpour of passion (tehe, I'm getting dramatic *slap* stop Brenda!), are the simple heart-to-heart emotions of a teenage girl. Sometimes it felt as though I was reading my own diary. Wow! Aside from that, I want to know YOUR opinions on real-life issues. So tell me! With your writing I think those entries have the potential to be amazing. Literary style/Grammar: 8/10 You use a lot of slang, and although a little is alright, sometimes I found it detracting from your entry. Layout: 14/15 Not bad, not bad. Links are easy to find, cute setup. I just feel kind of lopsided... I understand it's made for lower resolutions, but could you center it? Contact: 4/5 Email, notes, guestbook. IMs? Extras: 9/10 Lots of stuff... me, cast, pics (coolio!), rings, Imood, sweetie pies (tehe). Maybe you could add a site meter. Ethereality: 15/15 Definately! I only had to read a couple of entries to realize that you have a strong sense of who you are. Besides, you're a self-proclaimed dork! How can you not be cool? Will I return? 5/5 Definately! Total: 93/100 A Additional Comments Nice Job! Reviewed by Brenda
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