2002-10-25 - slayryder
My Little Shirtwaist Fire Content: 40/40
Woh. You have an amazing sense of who you are. Within about 25... no more like 30 seconds of reading your diary I knew who you were, where you had come from and where you felt you were going. It's not often that I get to read diaries that have such a sense of individuality. Even though I can't relate to a lot of what you discuss, you somehow drew me into what you were saying anyway. Amazing.
Literary style/Grammar: 10/10
No problems. I liked the flow and your style. You combine your day-to-day activities and your feelings really well.
Layout: 13/15
Definately designed for 1024x768 or 800x600. Kinda annoying that the background becomes rather distracting in anything higher. That's ok though, I just have to get off my high horse and read in a smaller res. Crazy me. It bugged me that I couldn't highlight what I was reading (I always do for some odd reason). The image is a bit blurry at the top, but nevertheless it is an interesting design, and very unique.
Contact: 4/5
Email, notes, guestbook. IMs?
Extras: 11/10
IMood, rating, cast, rings, tests, poems, surveys, reviews, 101 things, after death, bio *gasps* Wow! Go you! I especially loved the Bio and Cast pages, after reading those it felt as though I had been reading your diary for months!
Ethereality: 15/15
As I said before, you know exactly what you believe in, and will say it no matter what anyone thinks. You can also be very dramatic in your writings, such as here, and that really added a lot to your sense of individuality.
Will I return? 5/5
Definately!
Total: 98/100 A+
Additional Comments
Wow, you deserve it!
Reviewed by Brenda
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